2 original short stories with biblical themes
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betapleaseFandom: Original (The Lover of Lilith)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Explicit; since this story is based on the myth of Lilith and the portrayal of Mary in the Bible, religious themes are unavoidable; first time sex and also magical F/F impregnation (not futa).
Estimated Fic Length: 6K
Notes: This short story is for a submission call. I already have an editor looking at it, but I could use a second pair of eyes. I'm ESL and while some of my Danglish (Danish-English) is intentional, some of it is not, and I could really use some help weeding out the latter. I could also use a more trained smut gaze than my own on the sex parts. I use a deliberately flowery language, but I still want it to read as "proper" smut and could use help there.
Fandom: Original (No Room In the Inn)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Mature; portrayal of pregnancy and childbirth; coming out-metaphors and a general allegory for LGBT+-people getting thrown out by parental figures.
Estimated Fic Length: 1500-ish words
Notes: Same as above, minus the submission call and sex parts.
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Explicit; since this story is based on the myth of Lilith and the portrayal of Mary in the Bible, religious themes are unavoidable; first time sex and also magical F/F impregnation (not futa).
Estimated Fic Length: 6K
Notes: This short story is for a submission call. I already have an editor looking at it, but I could use a second pair of eyes. I'm ESL and while some of my Danglish (Danish-English) is intentional, some of it is not, and I could really use some help weeding out the latter. I could also use a more trained smut gaze than my own on the sex parts. I use a deliberately flowery language, but I still want it to read as "proper" smut and could use help there.
Fandom: Original (No Room In the Inn)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Mature; portrayal of pregnancy and childbirth; coming out-metaphors and a general allegory for LGBT+-people getting thrown out by parental figures.
Estimated Fic Length: 1500-ish words
Notes: Same as above, minus the submission call and sex parts.
